Assignment 2
Perfect apple
It was a day that I will never forget. I woke up at 6 am and started the day with 5 pull-ups. Next I saw my dog Fluffy wagging his tail and I realize that he had made up some kind of game. Fluffy led me outside and showed me a spot on the ground. I took the shovel what was leaning against the wall and started to dig a hole to the ground. Suddenly I hit the shovel something hard and of course it was just Fluffy's bone. Fluffy attacked to take the bone from my hand and accidentally bit my finger.
I went inside to clean my wound. I looked at the clock in my room and realized it was already 8 am. I jumped the stairs down and ran into a bus. I just made to my class and walked looking confident in. School day went fast.
I got home to the door and noticed that i had left the keys inside. I ringed the doorbell and luckily mum was already home. I laid in my bed for couple hours and felt a bit bored. I took my football with me and went for a walk. On the way to the football field nearby I saw perfect looking apple tree and I raised towards the apple. I took one and it was just as perfect as i thought. Then i got to the football field and I was playing all night long. The day where little weird but very fun too.
It was a day that I will never forget. I woke up at 6 am and started the day with 5 pull-ups. Next I saw my dog Fluffy wagging his tail and I realize that he had made up some kind of game. Fluffy led me outside and showed me a spot on the ground. I took the shovel what was leaning against the wall and started to dig a hole to the ground. Suddenly I hit the shovel something hard and of course it was just Fluffy's bone. Fluffy attacked to take the bone from my hand and accidentally bit my finger.
I went inside to clean my wound. I looked at the clock in my room and realized it was already 8 am. I jumped the stairs down and ran into a bus. I just made to my class and walked looking confident in. School day went fast.
I got home to the door and noticed that i had left the keys inside. I ringed the doorbell and luckily mum was already home. I laid in my bed for couple hours and felt a bit bored. I took my football with me and went for a walk. On the way to the football field nearby I saw perfect looking apple tree and I raised towards the apple. I took one and it was just as perfect as i thought. Then i got to the football field and I was playing all night long. The day where little weird but very fun too.
your assignment contains the whole nine actions and I think you`ve expressed the pictures in a good way in your story, except there is some grammar mistakes, and it would be more interesting story if u added more events to it, but otherwise a liked your story and enjoyed reading it.
VastaaPoistaThose are the nine actions that I found
1.started the day with 5 pull-ups
2.started to dig a hole to the ground
3.accidentally bit my finger.
4.I jumped the stairs down and ran into a bus
5.I just made to my class and walked looking confident in
6.I ringed the doorbell
7.I took my football with me and went for a walk
8.I raised towards the apple
9. Then i got to the football field and I was playing all night long.